tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post7051427388654948117..comments2023-11-03T14:06:09.787+05:30Comments on AEI Oh! You: Monopoly 2JFxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17311988206575395920noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-57705989635364186812008-02-02T09:22:00.000+05:302008-02-02T09:22:00.000+05:30Yeah the ending was quick. I had some difficulty f...Yeah the ending was quick. I had some difficulty finishing it off, since i didn't wanted the story to be too long.<BR/>The elucidation: Shawn had a serious brain disorder for which he have to take Angetine Phigteror regularly..In the quest for money he forgot that.Ajhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15363073420923789329noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-55669735154937377752008-02-02T02:43:00.000+05:302008-02-02T02:43:00.000+05:30Like gemo and jfx said, truly terrific narration.....Like gemo and jfx said, truly terrific narration.. you done some research before setting out on the article i suppose.. hmm... good.. <BR/><BR/>for me the ending was abrupt... As Gemo rightly points out the pace was a lil too quick.. <BR/><BR/>Anyways keep up the good work dude,waiting for more from you...H@rihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15865879989548552180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-69752198535745161932008-02-01T23:24:00.000+05:302008-02-01T23:24:00.000+05:30Hey man...good thing that you continued with it......Hey man...good thing that you continued with it...Chapter 1 was sweet surprise and rather outlandish in comparison with our usual entries. In comparison with the moderately paced build of Chapter 1, this one went really fast. I must say it was a little too fast and gathered more speed towards the end. And the ending, according to me, requires further elucidation.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing man...your style reads very professional and something above-age. Visualization is easy and automatic...that's rare for an amateur.g3Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13130843535457227021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-6271250942075906582008-02-01T20:38:00.000+05:302008-02-01T20:38:00.000+05:30good style of writing.. the background setup is ex...good style of writing.. the background setup is excellent.. tht's your forte in my opinion..JFxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17311988206575395920noreply@blogger.com