tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post1528805720007589796..comments2023-11-03T14:06:09.787+05:30Comments on AEI Oh! You: The PastJFxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17311988206575395920noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-79536207803779126742007-10-15T23:10:00.000+05:302007-10-15T23:10:00.000+05:30gud innovative style of writing first of all..and ...gud innovative style of writing first of all..<BR/>and gud use of words..<BR/>from a critical point of view, i dint feel it as confusing as inquisitivo says, but felt that it was goin thru the same point again and again to make the poem longer.. so it fails to keep attn till end..JFxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17311988206575395920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8353078856746940057.post-19812597082057247742007-10-15T22:45:00.000+05:302007-10-15T22:45:00.000+05:30woooo..... [sittin with jaws dropping till toe]awe...woooo..... <BR/>[<I>sittin with jaws dropping till toe</I>]<BR/>awesome...dude!!nice "verve" of writing...hehe!<BR/> though i must confess didn get much outta ur poem, beginnin was kinda like "yeah! k,lets see wat the kid's got".. then in the middle portion it was like "entammeee,whn did he turn pro?" and finally in the end i was like "boom!" completly and utterly blank,"gosh he's a psychopath"(sry if it sounds stingy... :-P)....... <BR/>i cud only comprehend tat u were feeling extremely nostalgic and wrote a wonderful poem only you can understand and perhaps you want the reader to find a meaning of his own... rt?? <BR/>hmmmm.. watever..nice work boy.. keep it up!H@rihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15865879989548552180noreply@blogger.com